Sunday, December 5, 2010

My first poem

I woke up in the morning
And opened the blinds
There she was standing
Beautiful in pristine whites

I went out to have a walk with her
It seemed so fabulous
But she warned me in a while
"Be careful.... this can be treacherous"

I said I'll be careful
And so we went along
With days full of fun and frolic
Ignorant of the bed of thorns

She glowed in all her glory
When the sun shone on
But little did I realize
That he will take her along

Then she bade me goodbye
I thanked her for all the joy
With a heavy heart and thoughts in my head
I shut the blinds and went straight to bed

I woke up in the morning
And opened the blinds
And I longed to see her standing
Again in her pristine whites

But as I looked out half asleep
My heart took a leap
There again she was standing
Adorned with grace in her majestic green

- Anoop

9 comments:

  1. good 1 Anoop.. would like to read more poems..

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  2. nature...snow and greenery!

    amazing visualization! awesome for a start

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  3. nice poem man..do keep writing..

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  4. Da.. Nice poem.. You really are glad to have snow around ;)

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  5. Daaaa....m proud of ya...super proud!!! hugggssss!!

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  6. Hidden Talent and all!!!!!!! who is she??? sach bol... ;)

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  7. Am glad you wrote. It is great to take time out to appreciate things before they become Mundane. Hope you keep that eye and words will follow

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